10/04/07 Part II

My personal essay is of the returning memories of a life that was almost completely forgotten. It is of the analyzing and discovery of what I have made myself forget over the course of my life. My essay is of the obstacles and difficulties I've went through and that I got past it all. It is also to show how my life has improved ever since I've been with my fiance. This essay is meant to say no matter how bad things may seem they can get better.
The thing I need help with in my essay is having limitations. I found myself just keep on writing and when it came time to post it I had to finish it up and didn't have time to revise and add other things I wanted to. I wanted to add in doors symbolizing the stages in my life. The first being my closet door with a bunch of clutter falling out of it then the door leading out of my room which is clutter-free and then the door at the end of the hall which is yet to be open and must be reached.